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Using Maps to Tell A Story: Cartography, Visualization, and Research – NVWP Summer ISI – Day 9

Welcome to the Northern Virginia Writing Project’s 2016 Invitational Summer Institute! I’ll be blogging the demonstration lessons and the various activities occurring during our four-week duration. Find out more about the NVWP and the National Writing Project.

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Christy Gill kicks off our third and penultimate week of the ISI with a presentation on combining research, maps, and writing. Students research a topic they’re interested in, create some sort of mind map, sketch note, or visual, and then compose a write-up about the process.

Quickwrite: How have you used student-directed learning in your classroom? What are the challenges? The successes? 

Although I haven’t implemented Genius Hour or something similar, I try to create assignment structures that allow for a fair amount of student choice. I’ve let students come up with assignments, pick topics, pick formats, create individual timelines, and self-assess. Many students enjoy the ability to direct aspects of their own learning. That said, placing decision-making power in the hands of students can be a daunting task for a few key reasons. 

Most students (and teachers) aren’t used to equitable power sharing in the classroom. In fact, even the term ‘equitable power sharing’ is amorphous and ambiguous. Some students can become frustrated and recalcitrant when provided with freedom. Sometimes this is because I did a poor job of scaffolding and building up to the freedom. Other times it’s because our culture of education is often one of compliance. Whether through rules, punishments, or rewards, students are used to 1. being told what to do, 2. being told how to do it, and 3. given feedback on how they did what they were supposed to do. 

We share out. A few of us speak on the ethics of student-directed learning. How children from certain backgrounds have resources at home to help them while others don’t. How certain types of children (white & middle/upper middle class) typically receive more guidance and exposure to student-directed learning. Heads around the room are nodding.

Christy tells us that students do not need a lot of geography knowledge in order to succeed with this project. Maps can tell a story and provide inroads to different types of literacy (research, visual, cartographic, to name a few!). Christy’s map project begins with asking students the following questions:

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Student examples include literacy rates and crime, erosion at the Outer Banks, the geography of NFL fans, to name a few. Here are a couple examples:

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Here’s a truncated version of the process students worked through:
1. Brainstorm topics both interesting and robust enough to sustain research. What do you want to know more about? Is the topic easy to research or obscure? How can you visually represent what you learn?
2. Create a daily timeline and to do lists.
3. Create the map.
4. Write the map story.

Here’s my number 1:

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Here’s what she gives us for number 2. We’re not going to do this now because of time constraints. Christy tells us that this is an easy place to add or remove scaffolding as necessary for each student. Daily check-ins also the teacher to touch base with every student and offer guidance and support as necessary.

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Here’s the map I made for step 3! It visualizes my thinking about teacher subjectivity. I tried to use pictures to represent school climate, public discourse, U.S. climate, philanthrocapitalism, center/margin, and binary discourse. So fun!

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We spend the least amount of time on the fourth step: writing the map story. This makes sense to me, because while many of us do plenty of low-stakes writing, we rarely spend time on creating visual mapping products.

The questions for the map writing piece are:
1. What did you create?
2. How did you create it?
3. Why is this topic important?
4. SO WHAT?

This project is rife with possibilities for differentiation. What a great way to start off the day!

 

My White Fragility

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This is a scary blog post to write. I’ve been writing about race for a couple of months now, and every time I do, my body revolts. My eyes blink uncontrollably; my hands tremble; my heart feels like it’s trying to crack open my rib cage and escape. The fear of exposing my racism hijacks my rationality and rides roughshod over my nervous system.

At the same time as I’m coming unglued, I feel a desire to be recognized and congratulated for my posts. My brain serves up images of me leading other white folks out of racial ignorance and into some sort of enlightened state. I look desperately for signs of affirmation from people of color that I’m “doing the work.” My need for approval is itself a manifestation of white supremacy. I want to be recognized, to be praised as an example of what it means to be an anti-racist white guy. No matter how hard I try to ferret out these impulses, they always return. Often within the same second.

Right now, this is the best that I can do. No matter how many times I rewrite these sentences, there’s no way to out-write the orbit of my own ignorance. I’m not disparaging myself, just trying to work through what happens inside of me when I try to talk about race. It will take more than reading a few books and and writing a few blog posts for me to come to terms with hundreds of years of white supremacy. It’s likely that I’ll never be able to understand my participation in systematic oppression and dominance. That’s the power of ideology. My whiteness isn’t like an article of clothing I can decide whether or not to wear. I exist through my whiteness.

I was one of those white people who was shocked by Charlottesville. My ability to be shocked by bigotry comes from living and participating within a culture of white supremacy. When I say white supremacy, I’m not referring to hooded Klansmen or racist family members, but the social institutions (politics, medicine, education, law, etc.) that work in tandem to grant white people material benefits by subordinating people of color.

After Charlottesville, I started speaking up on social media about issues of race and white privilege. I posted graphics of white supremacy, shared anti-racist classroom resources, and spoke up about the importance of white people putting in work. A few white men reported my posts to Facebook for being “racist against whites.”

White folks also began popping up on my social media threads to call me out for “sermonizing” and “causing divisions.” At first, I was surprised. Why would something so simple as a self-explanatory image or a post about racism draw such ire? And then I remembered: white fragility.

The men commenting on my posts and reporting me provided textbook examples of how whites struggle to comprehend and discuss race with any level of complexity and nuance. White folks also lack the stamina necessary for serious discussions around race. I’m no different. Working on this post has hollowed me out. Sustaining the mental energy required to write this post has left me gasping for air. 

I’m able to call out fragility in these men because I recognize it in myself. For instance, a few days ago I read White People Have No Place in Black Liberation,” a phenomenal essay exploring the inextricable link between Whiteness and oppression. (Support the author and the publication here) The essay is painful to read because it feels like a personal attack. The essay’s conclusion, “…our focus is always on Black folks figuring out new and better ways to get free—independent of white people and capitalism and the entirety of western empires,” triggers an existential howl from the depths of my whiteness. What about me? Can’t I help? People of color need me! I’m useful! That author sounds mean. 

My brain is literally and figuratively unable to think about what it means to de-center myself. It’s like trying to speak a language I haven’t learned yet. So I sit with my feelings and monitor my reactions and defensive posturing. I don’t feel bad about feeling bad, and this isn’t a pity-post. The experiences I’ve described here represent absolutely nothing compared to what people of color must experience on social media on a daily basis, much less “in real life.” As Robin DiAngelo notes, my Whiteness “affords me a level of racial relaxation and emotional and intellectual space that people of color are not afforded as they navigate mainstream society” (177-178). I must do better and I will do better. 

I recently watched a video of minister, author, and teacher Reverend Dr. Raymont Anderson discuss pain, spirituality, and healing. He mentioned how caterpillars transform into butterflies; they dissolve themselves in their own acid before rebuilding anew. Caterpillars use specialized diagram cells to regenerate their new wings, eyes, and antennae. The maps they need for their journey are contained within. But what happens if the directions I carry inside are faulty? How can I reinvent myself if I’m always going to the same place? 

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Writing Resources from the Northern Virginia Writing Project

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The Writing Project rules. It has influenced every aspect of my pedagogy.  Every summer for the last four years I’ve been fortunate, lucky, and privileged to be able to spend time with my local affiliate’s Invitational Summer Institute. The ISI is a four week celebration of writing. Teachers spend time giving demonstration lessons, participating in writing groups, and learning the ins and outs of composition.

A colleague of mine recently asked about using This I Believe podcasts in class. Remembering that a teacher gave a demo lesson this last year, I shot him the link. I decided to collect some of the demo lesson write-ups on one page. Hopefully these resources might be of value to teachers!

How Do I Write? Examining Our Writing Process Pt. 1

Cheese and Chocolate – Descriptive Writing

ESOL Bootcamp – Writing with Language Learners

Encouraging and Supporting Writers through Technology

Line and Stanza Breaks in Free Verse Poetry

Progoff Journaling – Personal and Expressive Writing pt. 1

Progoff Journaling – Personal and Expressive Writing pt. 2

Teacher Writing and Publishing

Physicalizing and Brainstorming Strong Verbs

Teaching Persuasive Writing through Op-Ed Genre Study

Writing Extraordinary Profiles of Ordinary People through Profile Genre Study

Working Titles to a T

“If You Really Want to Hear About It: Holden Caulfield and Voice

Student Made Standards Based Rubrics

Integrating Multi-Genre Research Projects with Technology

Thinking Places: A Playful Activity for Personal Narratives

Multimodal Literacy and Poetry with English Language Learners

Writing Notebooks: Playgrounds for Writers

Multigenre Projects and Metacognitive Thinking

Using Primary Resources for Writing Instruction

Found Poems: A Generative Pathway to Meaningful Textual Interactions

Using Improv in the Class to Enhance Openness and Creativity

Using Maps to Tell A Story: Cartography, Visualization, and Research

Visual Literacy: Exploring Stories Within and Beyond the Frame

Writing in ESOL: A Journey

Stretch A Lot – Stretch A Little: Using Hyperbole to Enhance Memoir Writing

Using Writing Conferences to Implement the Writing Process

A Masterclass in Writing Fiction – Pt 1

A Masterclass in Writing Fiction – Pt 2

Beyond Socratic Seminars and Essential Questions: The Importance of Student Generated Questions

Using This I Believe Podcasts to Elevate Student Voice

Bonus! Want to Upgrade Your Theory Game? Check Out These Posts on Composition Pedagogy Theory

Expressivist Composition Pedagogy

Collaborative Writing Pedagogy

Critical Composition Pedagogy

Process Composition Pedagogy

Feminist Composition Pedagogy

Genre Composition Pedagogy

Literature and Composition Pedagogy 

 

 

 

 

Using Primary Resources for Writing Instruction – NVWP Summer ISI – Day 7

Welcome to the Northern Virginia Writing Project’s 2016 Invitational Summer Institute! I’ll be blogging the demonstration lessons and the various activities occurring during our four-week duration. Find out more about the NVWP and the National Writing Project.

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As the title suggests, today’s first demo lesson combines writing with primary sources. This lesson comes out of an institute Emily completed through the Library of Congress. She comes from a WAC (writing across the curriculum) background.

Quickwrite: Take 3 minutes to respond to this quote: All you need to create an accurate account of any historical event are history books, photographs, motion picture film, sound recordings, maps, newspapers, and magazines.

Hmm. I’m not sure how to take the quote. Is it supposed to be a sort of ‘ha ha’ quote? As in, the only things you need to create an historical account are multifaceted and numerous? Or is it a more straight forward question? As in are the following cultural and historical documents are able to give an accurate representation of a historical event? I mean, if you were indeed able to have all of those items, I think you’d be able to construct a fairly accurate representation. They key is having historical objects that allow for deconstructive readings and counter-narratives. Having all the sources in the world isn’t that helpful when every source tells the same story from the same point of view. But if the collection of objects represents a variety of perspectives, than yea, it’s good.

We share out. As frequently happens, the sharing process reveals that many of us took the question in different directions. Some of us focused on the word ‘accurate;’ others said what sources they would add to the collection.

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Today’s objectives are:
-How does an author’s purpose shape his or her creation?
-How does this point of view shape an author’s creation?

First we’re going to learn how to use primary sources for beginning a unit. Emily tells us she’s going to run through with us first before letting us tackle one with our groups. This essential teaching technique is often referred to as the ‘guided release’ model.

She puts up the following picture and asks us what we notice. What can we infer?

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We notice the fashion, the desks, the stove, the classroom-like atmosphere of the room, the great expression of the kid in the right foreground. What are the two girls in the front doing? With my brief knowledge of ed history, I know that many 19th century (and early 20th, I think) schools had monitorial systems that required students to be in charge of what other students were doing, learning, and etc. According to the source website (http://www.loc.gov/pictures/item/ncl2004004981/PP/) this 1917 image captures the daily examination of each pupil’s hands, teeth, and nails.

Emily runs us through an inquiry cycle of observe, reflect, and question. She hands us an organizer for the questioning sequence, a new picture, and releases us to work through our new image. My partner and I go to work using this:

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to explore this:

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So fun! Emily gave each group an image in a manila folder with the explicit instructions not to look at anyone else’s image. We share out what we noticed, wondered, inferred. Everyone has come up with such rich information about their image. Next we have a big reveal of everyone’s images. They’re all a part of Dorothea Lange’s well-known Migrant Mother series. Emily talks us through a more detailed history of the images, explaining more about the photographer, the purpose, the aftermath, etc.

Emily asks us to reflect upon how the author’s purpose shaped the composition of the images. Even though few of us in the room have formal training in photography we’re able to talk about the specifics of the image. This is how it can be with our students. We also talk about how this image (or this type of image) would play out in today’s landscape. How does the rise of the cell phone camera and the amateur photographer/videographer affect the static iconic picture? The room gets into a great discussion about authority, truthfulness, and the ethics of imagery.

She brings us to critical analysis. How can we make sure our students are engaging with the torrent of media with a critical eye?

Quickwrite: Reflect on the photographs we’ve seen.

As with most of the teachers in the room I’ve seen this set of images before. They’re incredibly powerful depictions of grief, poverty, family, and self-determination.They’re also the product of specific contexts and purposes. What counter-narratives are possible? How would a feminist or Marxist lens alter our reading of the images? 

I definitely need to use more images in class. While I use plenty of them for writing exercises, I don’t use them to push critical thinking and multiple perspectives. Can’t wait to do this in the falll!

Emily wraps up with some additional applications for using primary sources in the classroom:

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Blinded by Learning: How Contemporary Discourse Subverts Education’s Potential

I recently had the opportunity to attend a focus group for ASCD, an international nonprofit organization specializing in issues of curriculum and supervision. Principals, teachers, and administrators gathered to discuss what we saw as the most pressing concerns facing today’s educators. At some point the issue of teacher evaluations came up. A principal explained that his teacher observations focused 100% on students. He didn’t provide a single word of teacher-centered feedback. “It’s all about student learning,” he said as those around the table nodded their heads in approval. “My job is to maximize student learning. Why would I focus on what the teacher was doing?” This sentiment was echoed many times throughout the session. Whether maximizing student outcomes, developing action plans based on data, or collaborating in PLCs, the concept of observable student learning dominated the 90 minute conversation.

The notion that schools should revolve around student learning seems obvious. Why wouldn’t we focus on what students are learning in our classrooms? Gert Biesta addresses this issue in his wonderful essay Against Learning. Biesta focuses on the terms we use to discuss education along with how those terms shape our very view of education itself. In the 1980s, he argues, our discourse shifted from an emphasis on education to a focus on learning. He credits four distinct phenomena for this change. New ideas about learning are the first reason for the linguistic shift. Groundbreaking theories such as constructivism showed us that learning isn’t a passive relationship. A fruitful exchange of ideas requires active participation on the part of the recipient. The introduction of postmodernism is the second reason. By providing a critique of Enlightenment-style rationality, postmodern theory helped us understand that education’s purview extends far beyond the realm of socialization and self-management. The third reason, the silent explosion of learning, is found in the proliferation of individualized learning applications and technologies. Often referred to as ‘learnification’ by commentators and educators, the silent explosion of learning enforces an individualistic, skill-centered view of schooling. Biesta’s final reason for our language of learning is the erosion of the welfare state. Since the 1970s the cultural climate of many Western nations has gravitated towards neoliberalism, a sociocultural ideology that subsumes everything to the power of the free market. Biesta’s article shook me to my marrow. This is an essay in the true sense of the word. It represents my first attempt at grappling with this complex material.

Everything we do as educators is now pitched towards the concept of student learning. Teachers have become redefined as servants and facilitators of learning. Schools push for “student-centered classrooms” that cater almost exclusively to the individual learning needs of each child. MOOCs and 1:1 initiatives offer the promise of individualized instruction to maximize student learning. Mastery objectives and standards-based assessment create a classroom paradigm where direct, observable learning is the apogee of quality instruction.

These aren’t necessarily bad things. Although the history of education is one of multiple perspectives and competing narratives, it wouldn’t be unwarranted to say that focusing on students is a positive development. The problem of our language of learning isn’t the focus, it’s what’s left out of the frame. In this case that’s nearly everything else.

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My primary concern with a language of learning is the way it enforces a hermetic vision of schooling. Questions about the purpose of education, about the fundamental makeup of the classroom, of the relationship between teacher and student, are impossible to address under a language of learning. The “why” of education has been successfully buried under a deluge of “how” and “what’s.” What strategies are we using? What are the mastery objectives? Where are you in regards to your curriculum pacing guide? Have you consulted your test blueprint/cross-walk when preparing this unit’s learning objectives? A language of learning only allows for a singular type of student, teacher, and classroom. Anything else is delegitimized. Students are seen as naïve consumers. Teachers are cast as the middle-men and women responsible for delivering the goods to the student. Regardless of whether we’re the sage on the stage or the guide on the side, the teacher’s only role is train students to acquire skill sets. Learning is a much more dangerous occupation than our current language would suggest. It requires trust, negation, dissonance, and support. Student and teacher must confront what is other, what is different. Our current educational language makes this extremely difficult.

The impetus for this piece came from my school’s beginning of year parent-teacher conferences. Nowhere is our language of learning more on display than during conversations between child, adult, and teacher. The entire enterprise of education, the glorious mess of dissonance and difference, vanishes without a trace as conversations become nothing more than dead language reducing everyone and everything to packaged units to be transferred back and forth. The teachers at my school (and every school) are fantastic. Their classrooms buzz with interesting projects, conceptual discussions, and real thought. You would never know that, however, by the conversations occurring during parent-teacher conferences. Study harder. Complete the classwork. Pay attention.

And I get it. The language of learning provides a comforting anchor. It has a way of reducing life’s deafening noise to a mechanistic equation of work hard, learn X, earn Y. It’s like everything we say and do is coming from a redacted script. An empty language full of shiny neologisms and outcomes yet signifying nothing. Instead, Biesta asserts that we must create spaces where students are able to confront, reflect upon, and come to terms with the plurality characterizing our society. An education free of scripted curriculum maps and vaccuum-sealed experiences. This is only possible when educators are able to discuss their purpose. To fully explore the reasoning behind every endeavor they embark upon in the classroom. Where a language of learning reigns, questions of purpose wither.

I read so you don’t have to: Katie Wood Ray’s ‘Study Driven’ – Part 1, Groundwork for an Inquiry Approach

Study Driven: A Framework for Planning Units of Study in the Writing Workshop
Katie Wood Ray

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TL;DR:In this book, Katie Wood Ray lays out a complete vision for implementing an Inquiry-based approach to writing. The study driven framework grounds student writing in real-world examples. Student discourse becomes the curriculum. The following chart summarizes KWR’s five-step approach to an inquiry method. Students read authentic writing, determine what makes each genre tick, then write under the influence of the genre.

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I will explore and summarize the book throughout two blog posts. Part 1 lays the ground work. Part 2 goes through the process. 

Chapter 1: Introduction
Framing writing instruction as ‘study’ represents an inquiry-based stance to teaching and learning. An inquiry stance repositions curriculum as the outcome of instruction rather than the starting point. In this particular set of practices, the students’ noticing and questioning around the gathered texts determine what will become important content in the study (the teacher doesn’t determine this in advance), and depth rather than coverage is the driving force in the development of this content.

Although this idea of “uncovering curriculum” isn’t new, it takes on heightened significance in an age when school districts expect teachers to map out dense scope-and-sequence plans and curriculum maps before children even enter the building after Summer Break.

Student responses to teacher questions aren’t just filler to provide a moment of engagement before the teacher tells the students what they should actually think. The teacher is obligated to do something with student responses. They are the important stuff, not the way to get to the important stuff. There is no content until the children start talking. There is no study without the students.

Chapter 2: Making a Case for Inquiry Study
This chapter explores a few popular alternatives to teaching from an inquiry stance.

-Guided practice: Use school-world examples of writing. First, teachers give a generic definition of the kind of writing they want students to be doing. Then, the teacher gives the students a graphic organizer or two to use when creating this type of writing. The teacher next models an example, writing a piece to lead her students. Lastly, students are let loose to write their own.

-Partial inquiry: Use real-world examples of writing. But instead of studying the texts with students, teachers would have previously planned out where they wanted to go with each text. This model allows teachers to plan units of study ahead of time for use in their own class or someone else’s. I’m reminded of the standardization work many counties expect from their teachers. In my county, for example, teachers use PLCs to create common end goals for a given unit.

-Lesson-Delivery: Traditional. Teachers assign writing for students to complete, turn in, and get back with a grade. There is no study or learning in this stance, simply mindless compliance. Teachers often ground this type of writing in “mythrules,” those desiccated writing rules that don’t really exist outside of a classroom setting. For instance, every paragraph in a piece of expository writing must begin with a main idea/topic sentences. This part-to-whole orientation provides teachers with a sense of comfort and control. Managing a classroom becomes much easier when you know exactly what everyone should be doing ahead of time.

-Study-Driven Inquiry: KWR posits that an inquiry stance is better than these other forms of instruction. It teaches students about the particular genre or writing issue that is the focus of the study, and also to use the same habits of mind experienced writers use all the time. They teach them how to read like writers. Instruction is grounded in how texts actually function and how authors really use words.

Big Shift – What role should modeling play?
Teacher modeling is an essential component to writing instruction. Teachers often use model more in the noun sense than in the verb sense. They want their writing to serve as a model for what the students will write. An Inquiry stance, on the other hand, uses real-world texts as the examples. This allows teachers to model the process, not just the creation. Teachers can make their thinking public about what decisions they’re making, the how and the why and the where of the writing process. Students learn to write from reading rather than teaching.

Closing thoughts on teaching from an inquiry stance:
-asks students to read like writers, developing a habit of mind that will potentially teach them how to write well throughout their lives
-ensures that the content for writing is grounded in realities of both the writing process and product
-expands the teacher’s knowledge base
-helps students develop a guiding vision for writing before they engage in revision
-asks the teacher to model the process, not the product

“When what you know about ‘people who write’ becomes what you know ‘as a person who writes,’ what you know changes.” (32)

Chapter 3: Before Revision, Vision
This chapter makes a case for helping students develop a vision for their writing.

Students should always be able to answer the question, ‘What have you read that is like what you are trying to write?’ For purposeful revision to take place, students must have a clear vision of what they want to accomplish in the first place. The content that each writer decides to pursue can be individual, but the vision for the piece comes from the larger world of writing. Students should look at a range of kinds of writing they can do inside a particular mode or genre and then decide what kind of article they want to write.

Before vision, intention:
One of the key responsibilities of the writing teacher, therefore, is to help each student develop intentions as writers. This means developing purpose, passion, and reason to write something.

This leads to a tension: whole class genre study forces the intention to come from the vision of a kind of writing, and not the other way around. This is important. KWR accepts this tension, however, for two reasons. First, the tension is grounded in the reality of some writers’ real world experiences. Many authors must meet deadlines and create different types of pieces that start from somewhere else other than within. Second, genre study exposes students to the wide variety of writing that exists in the outside world. Genre study helps students fulfill intentions they might not have known existed in the first place.

“Units of study other than genre (like one on punctuation) should therefore be carefully folded into the year.” (54)  

Chapter 4: Understanding the Difference between Mode and Genre
This chapter explains how to use ‘mode’ and ‘genre’ to help students compose meaningful pieces.

Modes describe the meaning work that a writer is doing in a text. They come from the influence of traditional studies in rhetoric. Genre is the thing people actually make with writing.

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If there are clearly defined and professionally accepted labels for the kinds of writing teachers want from their students, use them. But this often isn’t the case. Don’t shy away from certain kinds of writing because you don’t know what to label it. As long as you can gather a stack of texts fulfilling similar intentions, then you’re good. Let the definition come from the characteristics those texts share. Clarity of vision comes when writers say as much as they can to describe the kind of writing they have in mind.

Different Modes at Work (within the same text)
Authors often use several modes in a single piece of text to accomplish their purpose. Most pieces, regardless of the genre, switch off between description, persuasion, narration, and exposition. KWR states that although this might be commonly understood, schools have a tendency to gloss over complexity of modes within a single text. KWR argues that this oversimplified notion of mode is detrimental to curriculum.

The fix is simple: use genre (instead of mode) as the point of departure for a piece of writing. So instead of teaching students to do persuasive writing and descriptive writing, have students write opinion pieces and book reviews and novels and commentary. Know what kind of thing you want students to write, then show it to them. So, start with genre.

“The thing to remember is that mode is a descriptive device, not a prescriptive one.” (61)

Part 2 coming tomorrow! Thanks for reading.